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Do you all hear me scream
Scream for the pain to go
Scream for comfort, scream for
Freedom, and get naught but
Pain?

Do you see me falling
Falling into nothingness
Falling from so high
Tasting the blood in my mouth
A warm and bitter taste

Do you notice, do you care? I
Know not, I can’t see, the fear
In my heart, the rage of my soul,
The grief of my being..

Will you come at my call, come to
Save me? Save me and hold me close
And make it go away?

Or will you come and laugh and poke
and party once I’m gone.
©2008-2009 *TheDarkmage
:iconthedarkmage:

Author's Comments

I'm feeling pretty crappy at the moment due to life events, been unable to communicate with my friends, having nothing to do but draw or write stuff and I don't entirely feel like doing either too much.

I just feel so pissed off that my computer died and it's taking it's sweet time to get repaired.

Call me emo, use whatever insult you want against me, I won't give a shit, I've heard alot of insults and most of them were directed at me.

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:icontwighlightmoon:
I really like this poem, I hope you feel better and once you do I bet you'll realize what I did: Writing sounds a heck of a lot cooler when you were really feelin' some deep stuff. Love the poem, thanks for writing it! Buh-bye

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I'll just keep fueling the fire til I burn to death
:iconthedarkmage:
Thanks for the comment, and I don't know when I'll feel better, hopefully once everything is back to normal at home.

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Come back IKEA man! I want a shitty coffee table!

Need a voice actor? Note me, I have a variety of voices I can do, both high and low pitched.
:icontwighlightmoon:
:Nod: of course. Try to feel better soon X)

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I'll just keep fueling the fire til I burn to death
:iconpikichu:
Nicely written.. *hopes the c omputer will be fixed soon*

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WOO! I love this game! [link] Check it out, it's tons of fun

My record [link] (okay, now go play the game)
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:iconyamiphaedra:
Don't worry about it, you'll get back on soon. We haven't forgotten about you.

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